Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Response to Dominicana’s Poem: Person Who’s always Been There

I was going through everybody’s page (because I know how now!!! Ya gotz to be happy for me)

Well anywho... I came across this poem. It caught my eye because I was curios as to who was important to her. Anytime I'm asked who is the most influential person, or my hero, or who is the most important person in my life; I always conclude with my mother. My mom is always there when I need her; She is the strongest person I know (I mean who can be mom, dad, cook clean, repair things around the house and on top of all that keep up with work and 3 kids?) I hold my mother right up there with God. And if I could be a fraction of her awesome I’d be ecstatic because I would have achieved a great deal. Love my maja

…Turns out the poem was her mom as well :-) (how cute is that)

Moms are GREAT!!!
Some dads too ;-D

CHECK IT OUT FOLKS!!! YOU WON’T BE DISAPPOINTED
http://carmen04-dominicana.blogspot.com/2009/10/person-whos-always-been-there-my-life.html

My favorite quote

"Its like when I'm right I'm right, when I'm wrong I could been right, so I'm still right cause I coulda been wrong, you know, and I'm sorry cause I could be wrong right now, I could be wrong"

Terrence Howard in 50Cent's Get Rich Or Die Tryin

I love this quote only because it sounds so philosophical. I mean, Who says things like this??? (lol) When I finally got the movie in my hands I put this part on repeat so that I could decipher what he meant.

Do you have any Idea what the outcome of this quote is?

About the writting process

I’ve come to find that webbing (Or what ever it’s called), and outlining essays don’t do much to assist me. They seem to add more confusion. So when I begin to write it’s always like free writing, I just put pen to paper and write what I believe I’d want to be in my essay. I do this for like ten to fifteen minutes and normally come out with a good rough draft.

From there, like with essay 2, I just added in others input and facts retrieved from the tech’s I know and other websites. I had to do a lot of compressing as well. I didn’t want the paper to be like ten pages long so I took out all the things that seemed like hoopla. (lol. I like that word)

Now that I’m looking over my essay with my classmate’s critique (the chick who stole my B-Day) I see a lot of changes I want to make. They’re overwhelming sorts of changes that I need to make. But since I have a week to accomplish this I may just get through it.

Ha, thanks for reading my babble.

Monday, October 19, 2009

Oh how I wish I knew what I were doing

I pray this blog counts for some credit
I'm going to talk about my cluelessness
lol... I don't think that's even a word.

Well, since :) Jolly (: assigned this BlogSpot thing I've been at a complete loss
In class we pulled up a section that tells gives you suggestions on what to write about,
Would you believe that I haven't been able to find it since?
It's true. I've clicked on every link I've seen and I get NOTHING!
This is truly frustrating.

I'm doing an essay on how to choose the right computer and I can't even write a blog
By the way, I've been working on that essay all weekend and finally, last night, at like 2 in the morning I got a flow of Ideas...
I pray the essay comes out well.
Still have to throw in some quotes and factual information
But I've got an awesome foundation now, I believe.

Well I hope somebody reads this and offers to help me with this blog thing so I don't have to fail English!
That would be devastating.